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Teyani Whitman's avatar

Powerful metaphor.. the ocean being behind your eyes and wanting to get out.

I have felt this too

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Yardena Schwersky's avatar

There are some days where it feels like you’ll never stop crying. Luckily there are also days when the sky fixes everything, even if only for a moment.

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Daniel Appleton's avatar

Yang & Yin. Those verses remind me of Vivaldi's Summer & Winter suites in " The Four Seasons".

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Yardena Schwersky's avatar

I actually wrote these during two different seasons. Interestingly, I wrote the first draft of Waterfall in the summer and Parhelia in the winter.

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