Remembering the sounds of my childhood
I love your imagery - it's as safe and cozy as it is stimulating and thought-provoking.
Thank you! I’m trying to do a bit more prose poetry type stuff as opposed to straight prose.
Love this line: “Sometimes I liked to run outside to get a glimpse of the passing steel slug as it heaved itself across the road.”
You convey the sounds so well in your writing. I didn’t grow up near a train track and it was very exciting to see a train.
I loved it! I also used to love getting stuck on the road when a train passed lol. It rarely happened so it always felt like a treat.
such a beautiful piece ❤️
Thank you so much! It was fun to write.
I love your imagery - it's as safe and cozy as it is stimulating and thought-provoking.
Thank you! I’m trying to do a bit more prose poetry type stuff as opposed to straight prose.
Love this line: “Sometimes I liked to run outside to get a glimpse of the passing steel slug as it heaved itself across the road.”
You convey the sounds so well in your writing. I didn’t grow up near a train track and it was very exciting to see a train.
I loved it! I also used to love getting stuck on the road when a train passed lol. It rarely happened so it always felt like a treat.
such a beautiful piece ❤️
Thank you so much! It was fun to write.